Query Cycle

Have you ever had to write a letter to get a job?

I just finished researching and sending out query letters to agents interested in New Adult fiction.

It’s an exhausting research process that more often than not results in a rejection letter. So I’m working hard to ensure they don’t reject me because I didn’t follow their guidelines or ensure that they represent what I’m offering.

Yes, the chances are slim. But that makes the acceptance all the more valuable.

Here’s the first couple of paragraphs from my query letter (I’ve left off the spoiler sentences).

I am seeking representation for my 85,000-word New Adult, DRAGON INK.

When Ellen’s life—successful young novelist, and soon-to-be grad student—derails at age 22 with the surprise loss of an unplanned pregnancy, she freezes. To restart her life, she writes a plan to tackle her fears one by one. Her energies attract a dragon. 

The dragon, Welglen, disguised as a human, has spent centuries protecting twenty-seven dragon eggs, but the spells hiding his nest are weakening as a half-human sorcerer closes in. Welglen’s in a tough spot. He can’t fight. Dragons were created to protect humans. Blocked by primal forces, Welglen needs a warrior. He needs Ellen.

Welglen and Ellen travel into the volcanic mountains of Northern California where Ellen trains on an ancient sword and struggles to find her courage. Together they must protect the newborn dragons against a sorcerer seeking immortality by consuming their hearts.